1)
Q3)
Expand: silk connotes luxury,sensual
Be specific + detailed in your evidence
What features show sexy and dominance? Lighting? Font choice? Slogan? CLAMPS?
Q4)
Only answer briefly on connoting questions. Only write a little.
Q5)
Include a point at the start
You are doing well on how part (evidence) but need more point + why (effect)
Q6)
In this question don't only focus on this advert (water aid) or you're re-awakening Q5
2) Q1) 1 , Q2) 1 , Q3) 6 , Q4) 1 , Q5) 3 , Q6) 2
3) Question 3 was one of my strong questions as I had great connotations and did good denoating. Another thing I think I did well was using good words for my connotations, for example, dominance, sexy etc.
4) One of my weaker questions was question 6 as I kept on referring to question five although the questions were not about each other. A second reason could be that I did not include how to my point.
5) Re-writing question five - The producers have used mise-en-scene to make the reader feel pity and sympathy. This is done by using the setting in CLAMPS. We can see in the background a hut and trees which denotes to us that this is a rural place. This has been done so the audience feels a sense of authenticity and truthfulness in the charity. This would allow the audience to feel safe and trusted to donate. This could have also been done so the audience would feel that the company persists through challenges and strives to give to others even when it would be harder in that area. This builds the trust of the audience which would make them willing to donate or share the media text. They have also used a child as an actor to make the audience feel even more responsible. They have used a child as it allows the audience to feel that they have a responsibility to help and puts them in a fixed position of whether if donating would be morally right or wrong. This effect is given as the target audience is adults which could be putting them in a relatable link if they have a child which puts pressure on the audience.
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