Please start a new blog post and call it 'Blog Feedback' and then copy and paste the below into your new post and do the LR 🙂
WWW- Your blog looks beautiful and shows a real attention to detail and high level of excellence. Your analysis is starting to be more detailed and your literacy levels are improving. Really good on gratifications and use of words like 'voyeuristic' used accurately.
EBI- More of the same please - make sure you are using phrases like 'emphasises' and 'reinforces' to think of higher level analysis and overall message / brand identity of products.
LR- Do one of the extension tasks or start the Marvel task - reading and watching video ahead of Thursday's lesson
Make sure you have defined vertical integration and HORIZONTAL correctly on the industry post.
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I have/will do the Marvel task.
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